Dear snow white.

   Dear Snow white it’s sleeping beauty here.

I’ve just finished reading your book but there are some things you have problems with.Firstly Walking in woods BY YOURSELF!!! you could've got  eaten by a wolf.

Second going into a STRANGER'S house and sleep on their beds. Do you wanna be the next Goldilocks?Who taught you to go into a stranger's house? The stranger would've been a killer you’re lucky they were dwarves.

Third not listening to instructions.Grumpy told you everything you

need to do but you 

didn't listen.Why would you let a ugly,scary,weird old creep in the house and why

would you want to taste an apple why wouldn't you just taste the apple pie.

1.The things I did like was that you were kind.

2.You helped the dwarves.

3.Neat and tidy.

4..Cleaned the mess.

My questions are:What did it feel like when you slept for ages?

Why don’t you listen to instructions?

Why  didn't you just taste the pie?

why do you talk to strangers?

Why did you eat the apple?

If i would rate this book it would be a 7 out of 10 due to the problems.

Yours sincerely your bff sleeping beauty.P.s Don’t forget i will be the next one sleeping.